As I a warrior maiden pass the whiten trees
I saw something that made me freeze.
A woman dress in red and white
with wings that could give flight.
On her hand she holden a bird
that caused me quite a strirred.
For a raven bird was know for death
I stood there with one breath.
It was only then I notice a sword
and that when my heart soared.
For this could only be the great knight
the warrior fairy that gave us our right.
The right for us woman to fight with our hearts
and to study the knight fighting arts.
I slowly turn to find my sword replace with her's
notice how lovely the wind stirs.
I turn to thank her for the gift
just to find her gone a drift.
Author notes
Love is a battle field.
The pictue I used was design by Nene Thomas and it's called "always".
option 3
neoladyem
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Ooh what a beautifully penned piece.
Great imagery and thoughts.
Dark and well-crafted.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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Great write. Thank you for sharing and entering the contest. Good luck.
♥
whisper
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Beautiful imagery. Fantasy writes aren't really my cup-of-tea, but it was still good.
It didn't inspire me though, so feel free to enter again :]
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Beautiful, simple yet not. Yeah how that is I don't know but it is. I loved the idea, I loved the visual. This is just a lovely little read, Thank you for your time and good luck.
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i really liked this entry. some lovely ideas, and i loved the rhyme. thanks for a wonderful entry. xx
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Guilty, Everybody is Guilty
Nice imagery, It's good to read something positive, I like the way it makes a person feel endowed and weaponed for whatever fight life may throw at you.
Women need more poems about women with balls.
(Figuratively Speaking of course)
( because if Women had balls they wouldn't be women now would they, and If they did have balls and were somehow still a women that would be kinda gross, A huge turn-off for me that's for sure.
Liked your poem.
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Guilty, Everybody is Guilty
Nice imagery, It's good to read something positive, I like the way it makes a person feel endowed and weaponed for whatever fight life may throw at you.
Women need more poems about women with balls.
(Figuratively Speaking of course)
( because if Women had balls they wouldn't be women now would they, and If they did have balls and were somehow still a women that would be kinda gross, A huge turn-off for me that's for sure.
Liked your poem.
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This poem has a very nice flow to it. I enjoyed the rhyme immensly. I can not rhyme myself so I have great appreciation for those that can. I really liked the last two lines. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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good write! i do have some questions about some of the rhymes like bird and strirred. i think they rhyme but "strirred" just doesnt fit in the poem. my favorite lines are "I turn to thank her for the gift
just to find her gone a drift." the words flow and work together greatly! best wishes in the contest!! keep up the fabulous writing!!
~horsecowgirl~
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