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The Hurricane

Ocean
Godlike shiny
Rising falling splashing
Calm pleasant chaotic malevolent
Raging crashing devouring
Apocalypse dark
Hurricane

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Wrote at some time during 2005-2006, for a school assignment.

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  • psycho-demonata
    October 13, 2007

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    Hurricanes are like women
    we come wet and wild
    and when we leave, we take everything away lol!

    anyways good uhh haiku is it?? can't remember
    but yes very descriptive and briiliant