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Love][War

The grass is matted, their bodies drenched
Life is in the End
flesh Enfolds a Gasp ensues
release from this corporeal [coil]
Life encircles: we don’t care
misty veil [beyond our limbs]
Never Conquered, Both are One
Transcendence

How violent are we with Love

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  • danceswsquirrels
    October 15, 2007
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    I'm so confused.. is this some people dying, wrestling.. or locked in a violent lovers embrace?

    Besides the confusion there I love your word choices, the way your lines wrap around eachother, and my favorite lines are the last too... It brings me to a feeling of completeness.. ::sighs::

    J~~~~