Rainbows fusion in kaleidoscopic ambition
cementing creation of intensity within
as tendrils of mystique awaken
evoking fruition of emotional awareness
nesting within the deepest recesses
blooming forth with angelic guidance
to mystic conjunction where eternal
ecstasy dwells and is deeply embedded
inside this entities heart and soul
Author notes
prompt: "Love has deep roots"
A contest entry
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750 points, ended October 15, 2007, 8 entries
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The comment below me says it all. "Soft flow" and "tenderness" were exactly what came to mind when I read this. Very subtle and romantic. Thanks for the entry!
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This is so beautiful, hon. Lovely words from the heart, very soft flow and tenderness. Wonder where that creative and unique theme came form? You write wonderful words of beauty.
Best to you!
Love,
mystic
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such beauty in your loving words and heart xxxx well done and best wishes xxx
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a most creative writing on the theme of deep roots of love, looking deeply within, some wonderful imagery and expresssion. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK
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