when you feel so down and lost in the world
when you dont know what to do,
so many things go on in life,
from wanting drugs, to craveing to cut
from a death of a friend,
the hurt of a nother,
when nothing is going right, and everything is wrong
when you cant find a brighter side
if you feel as though you cant stay strong
you want to go and hide never again wake up and see
this world this life, than again ..
[sometimes you just need help]
someone you count on to be there
one who will stay no matter what
who can help you find a bright side,
who can give you hope and love
one to whom will listien
one who will stay and let you just cry
someone you can count on,
to help you when you want to fall
to help you through it all
[sometimes you just need someone]
who you can talk to and everything is ok
who you can trust and give your tears aaway
who will never put you down
who will get you standnig tall again
to me this is my best friend, my boyfriend!
Author notes
it is kinda all the categories in one way or another, so yeah!
babe thank you, i love you so much like wow!!!!
A contest entry
- SOMETIMES: A word to use for this poem. by Angel Full Of Hurt.
666 points, ended October 28, 2007, 16 entries
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wow very nice
wow lovely write..thanks for entering my contest ..for this write i am adding u to my favourites!
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Wonderful
So beautiful when love is shown so beautifully good luck in the contest
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I'm glad here's there for you. I would be there for my ex but he went the other way. He's upset and in pain so wants time away from me, not with me. Well, he wont even talk to me
. But I love him still, as my heart aches for him. I'd do anything to make him better and to be with him, I'd go into that hospital for him and take those fucking injections that hurt so much.
Loved the write, it was very powerful and emotive and it's true for hte most part - we all like someone to be there when we are down and out.
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