Sometimes I can write good songs
Sometimes they turn out bad
They're not so good when they're happy
They're much better when they're sad
But I'm gonna hide my feelings deep inside
Yes I'm gonna hide my feelings deep inside
Sometimes I go for walks
To think and to breath fresh air
Sometimes I take you with me
Even though you're not really there
And I'm gonna hide my feelings deep inside
Yes I'm gonna hide my feelings deep inside
Author notes
Sometimes
A contest entry
- SOMETIMES: A word to use for this poem. by Angel Full Of Hurt.
666 points, ended October 28, 2007, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow this would make a good song
i could hear music behind these words
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This is beautiful"even though your not really there"Superb Mark. The simple things in life."Thoughts"
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Hide My Feelings
Absolutely...the simple things...couldn't agree more CherryOnTop
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Been there
Yes their are times when even I take walks and in my mind you are their with me to share the beauty that unfolds . A feeling I have to be so close within my mind your scent wafes upon the air A place where love
is forever shared
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Hide My Feelings
Thank you so much for your lovely words with which I can empathise.
tysonthedog
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Awesome!!!
I love this hunni, a great example of simplicity at its best! It has a superb rhythmic flow to it, best of luck in your contest!
Pink xx
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