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Halloween day bravery

Feeling cozy on my bed,
I switched off the lights.
It was time for me to sleep,
After a taste of the Halloween Day frights.

I forgot all about them,
And started dozing.
With only a candle as a source of light,
And my face towards it, facing.

Just then I heard something,
Too scary to be.
It was the clash of the windows,
Could someone ever be foolish than me?

I closed my eyes,
Expecting a good dream.
With a candy floss inside my mouth,
I dreamt of becoming the captain of my school team.

Engrossed in my dream,
I felt the legs of my spider dolly.
Keeping it aside,
Downstairs, I heard my brother playing with his toy trolley.

Among his toys was a ghoul,
With what he petrified me on all Halloween nights.
Trembling on my bed, I heard his trolley moving towards my room,
Expecting the worst, I switched on the lights.

It was my brother,
With his friends, the small kids.
All their toy monsters they had,
It scared me out of my wits.

I had been scared by a bunch of little monsters,
Neither a ghost nor a witch.
I looked at the moon and watched her being lonely among the darkness,
Still pure and rich.

Alas, I had been too foolish,
And changed myself to a brave man from a dummy.
But suddenly, I heard the noise once again,
This time I yelled out "Mummy!!!!"

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  • Celticmoon
    November 11, 2007

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    What a great job you have done with this piece and using the word bank! Very creative indeed Thank you for entering and best of luck to you!

    Blessings
    Bel


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 11, 2007

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    I like how you let the creativity flow here. You've done a fine job with the word bank and it is a great piece you've penned here


  • leander Moderators member
    November 9, 2007

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    You have done a very good job with the word bank you've chosen for option and your imagination - I have to second B Chandler on that - great!

    Best of luck in the contest
    Leander


  • B Chandler
    October 17, 2007
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    Very imaginative as well as great usage of the word bank