A sidelong glance, a breathy smile.
"I wouldn't want to disapoint you" whispered to the darkness,
This sensual lie tickles his ear,
He feels inclined to assure her, reassure himself.
Shifting silently closer he cannot contain his conceited touch.
His answer is the lingering touch.
She leaves his wasted body, dripping.
Author notes
the gap in the poem is for YOU! i think its true that the things that arent seen/said/heard are as important as what is, so i wanted so see how people interpret this scene and what they bring to it, so please feel free to tell me!
Please tell me what you think
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Succubus?
This has to be some heavy female revenge or male humiliation. I think I would add some lines about nightmares, ghouls and night time visitation. I'm very glad not to be the male in your poem. There is some great imagery and an underlying menace in this piece. I think you should finish it although I think its an interesting experiment.It's too good a poem in the making for you not to finish it. Thanks for sharing.
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hehe yeh
yeh i think i might...
what was that 3 about?
thanks for the comment
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