Sometimes I wonder
Why you're always in my mind
Tick tack toe all the time
I can't go to school
Now I'm like a fool
'Cause even if school I attend
I don't listen
'Cause even if i try
The teachings I don't get
'Cause even if i understand
I forget
It's all because of you
You inside my mind
Im not blamming you
But I find it true
Your like a cockroach
Sticking inside my heart
Making me scared and shy to approach
Making me think were do i start
This slimed mudded heart of mine
Is just like quick sand
You sink in to it all the time
And I just don't understand
You're such a bomb, shocking
Indeed, yes
You tickle my flesh
Like their's nothing left
You're just like bubblegum
Sticking inside my mind
Making me dumb
What is happening to me
Im going crazy
Your so sticky
So I think straight
Yet walk curves
By the stairs I wait
But all up high are my nerves
So I see you near
Then I have difficulty breathing
Your wondrous like smoke
Exciting that makes me choke
Your deadly
Poisonous
Such a beauty
So i gather the pieces of paper of my heart
To glue them back together
To form the so called guts
But still my mouth shuts
By this stairs I freeze
Feeling like melted cheese
Then I silently say
"I Love You"
Author notes
humour i hope, and i hope it made you laugh
A contest entry
- SOMETIMES: A word to use for this poem. by Angel Full Of Hurt.
666 points, ended October 28, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Awwww
this is not only funny, but romantic...perfect combination! great job!
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I just commented on this then I looked and it did not make it into the contest.
Maby if you tried to enter it again if it dosen't work I will contact a moderator and find out why.
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Very nice you did a good job with this.
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WOW
THIS IS GR8!!!!
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Yes it made me laugh
This is so good and not really funny for I know guys that literally became sick in their antisipation of the wait for their goddess to walk their way
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Did you include the word "sometimes"?
Include the word "sometimes" in your poem please...it's why the contest is titled "Sometimes: A word to use for this poem" anyway i do think this poem is a good piece...i dun think it's bad at all..i think it's interesting just include this word "sometimes" on it...see if you can do that..thank you..
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