Aspirations for attention -
rainbows across dull skies
Uniqueness - the virtue of the moment
I escape to anonymity,
seeking nameless refuge
Author notes
word count - 20
A contest entry
- cement moth-3 hours by Cat.
500 points, ended October 16, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lovely Work
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so much to like about this piece- this is one instance where i think a few more words would have given you just enough- but the limits i imposed cut this a bit short for you-
I think this is a piece you could definitely grow into something even more wonderful than it already is.
thanks so much for entering
m -
interesting twist from
that feel of wanting the attention
and ending in hiding from it
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