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The Definition of Love

Every morning whenever
I wake up I remember
about your face
If this is not it then
there is no other definition
of those four alphabets.

I can not think about
an hour when I do
not think about you.
If this is not it then
there is no other definition
of those four alphabets.

I am  waiting for you.
Seconds become minutes
and minutes become hours.
Hours become days.
That is how I am waiting for you.
If this is not it then
there is no other definition
of those four alphabets.

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  • Leaving Today
    October 22, 2007
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    hmm...lovely, well done

  • Virgoan
    October 19, 2007

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    I like the way you interpreted the meaning of love. My favorite is the last stanza.

    Well done poet!

    Keep writing and best of luck

    VIRGOAN


  • dubiety
    October 15, 2007

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    "If not then there is no definition of those four alphabets".
    Beautiful. Inspirational, a pleasure to read, as flowing as a cup of tea. (like my metaphor? )


  • Romily
    October 13, 2007

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    simply amazing......I wonder how u have managed ur thoughts in this poem......here lies the difference between a teacher and a student. you are awesome in heartfelt love. I really loved it.

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