I need to live,
to change,
something to believe
Felt so weak,
Want to give up life
See myself in a dead end.
In hope of your love
Think...had forgotten...
guarding my heart
of waiting
demanding
forgetting old things
not giving opportunity.
Hardly know what I want..
Am I worthy ?
Don't want to be with anybody
for fear of being alone
below expectations.
Heard "God ordered his Son
a new destiny to the world."
Way shows off
Does not leave
Manage to live,
to think,
Found the life,
Can breathe.
Crying..Calling..
Where You are ?
Just a wish..
To live with you eternally.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Quickie by Touchof1der.
525 points, ended October 13, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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"Just a wish... To live with you eternally". What a very powerful thought to leave lingering on the minds of your readers. Each line is so emotive and moving, it left me literally frozen in place. Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest and good luck!
♥ Touchof1der
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