What can make your world go round?
what can? and where is it found?
Like a convertible it will alter you
leave you floating in clouds of blue
Sensational, yes it's all of that
you'd get closure in it's habitat
Your deepest tears it will erase
and put your smile back into place
It has kidnapped a pair or two
painted in sunshine where it was blue
Spoken of in hushed and quiet tones
More deluxe than cream in honey cones
Let's sum this up, you just wouldn't like
to be without it during your life's hike
It's the tear shed with you in mind
it's the pearl of great price; gold kind
It's the bended heart in gold frame
If it's real, it will remain the same
As you walk down that isle and pursue
make sure you have this, so few do!
A contest entry
- Love is... by Virgoan.
300 points, ended October 21, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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The tone and rhyme scheme in this piece is very good. The way you touch one line against another.
Well done fellow poet! Wonderful!
Keep writing and best of luck
VIRGOAN
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Such a beautiful poem. Keep up the great work.
Amber
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Romantic poem here. Good luck in the contest
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Thank you so muchlol
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