The sweetest thing that e'er can be felt
That makes one's heart begin to melt
The fire inside that cannot die
The only thing that can make you cry
We see it in everything all around
It's frivolous, it's nothing, but deep profound
It makes you happy you scream and shout
It's what you cannot live without...
It can hold you thrill you, fill you
And in the end it will damn well kill you
It's when you look into tender eyes
It's what moves you to fantasise
It's when you run free and wild
And hold the hand of your little child
And when the night is cold and lonely
You dream of your one and only
That's what it is so hear its call
It's all for you, and for you all
A contest entry
- Love is... by Virgoan.
300 points, ended October 21, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love, love....
and your poem! Well done...
Happy Holidays!
*PEACE ON EARTH*
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very good
You describe LOVE so well in your write. I enjoyed reading it.
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I like the clarity and the contemporary interpretation of love. There is a shade of black and white within the words.
Great write fellow poet!
Keep writing and best of luck.
VIRGOAN
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Wonderful Writing
Stunning writing again, Goldie. I love this too. The flow was brilliant and the words are so true too. Love is all of those things and more. You more or less nailed it on the head. Well done.
All the best
Wayne
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Very good
And when the night is cold and lonely
You dream of your one and only
That's what it is so hear its call
It's all for you, and for you all
Wonderfull ending words for this verse
Like it
Rick
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Thank you for your comment Rick.
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Sweet, beautiful...good luck in the contest
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