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I cannot let them...

I cannot let them see me crying,
I cannot let them watch my sorrow.
I cannot let them slowly watch me dying,
I cannot let them see my heart break,
I cannot let them feel my pain.
I cannot let them see all the pain their 'jokes' cause me.

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Another one I wrote in maths!

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  • daisybee
    October 16, 2007
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    Hey!

    This was a particularly sad write-I am sending you a hug right now-Got it? Good. Stuff them whoever they are-you have a world of creativity inside of you that no-one can get close to-their words can't match the words that you write and so many enjoy. Love Em


  • babypunk13
    October 13, 2007

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    this poem seems hurtful

    the peom you wrot it seems to tell me you were picked on and ppl played jokes on you but any way great whrite