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A Monument ready - for the not yet dead . .

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The Queen arrived in gay array

And tens of thousands joined her to pray

As “We bless this memorial to our dead”

That is roughly what she said

 

It’s a wonderful monument . . meant in good taste

But I feel in truth it honors . . a tragic waste

It lists men and women in rows and rows

That gave their lives to fight Britons . . foes

 

They died fighting enemies of different sorts

Leaving friends and families . . overwrought

But are all those honored . . where they should be

And did their loss of life. .  advance our liberty

 

Do we have a liberty of which they’d be proud

As remembrance caused love ones . . to cry out loud

But look around . . and you will be dismayed

At the future thinking . . here on parade

 

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There are huge vacant spaces . . on as yet empty walls

Awaiting the future names . .that they will recall

People that in reality . . are actually still alive !

Who supposedly must die . . to help us survive ?

 

Surely these empty panels . . we should dread

That are displayed in readiness for our future dead                                                              

Do today’s dying soldiers . . in their mortal pain . .

Consider their sacrifice essential . .or in vain

 

But what good planning has here been shown

In this great monument . . to honour our own

But as I survey the frightening empty space

Oh God! How I pity the human race

 

There’s 16,000 names . . with space for 15,000 more . .

As the  planers foresee . . war after war

No doubt politicians will double . . all names carved here

Yes . . sadly, sadly,  that’s what I fear

 

Albert Gazeley © October 12 3007  

 

Author notes

There are almost 16,000 names carved on the memorial, at the National Memorial Arboretum, in Alrewas, Staffordshire, Opened by the Queen this week ( 12th October 2007) with space for 15,000 more,

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