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Astonish

I admit that I need intimacy 
Not the mechanical intimacy of a one night stand
I like it when eyes are soft
Touch is slow
And breath is soulful 
When you are revealing a deep innerness
That cannot be fathomed by words
The starlight glistening
The grassy dew dripping 
To touch the girl who hides away
Upon discovery
She is a storm inside 
The tidal waves crashing
The mountains standing
The sky sprawling
A taste of expectation that lingers –
Closer.

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