Barely standing in desolate domain
Reeking of memories
The House that Jack built
Once proud, and lively
Now broken, condemned
Misery prevails not
For Love and Beauty were it's occupants
Author notes
The Prompt was the pic at the end of this URL:
http://www.deviantart.com/print/628605/
A contest entry
- Quickie! ~Paying It Forward~ - Just Because I Can!!!! by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended October 13, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wicked picture and I love the dark take on a old nursery rhyme.
"Once proud, and lively
now broken, condemned
misery prevails not
for love and beauty were
it's occupants"
Great little segment -
Such a story you tell in this! Grats on your silver!
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ohhh this is just beautiful...great sentiment & nostalgia!!!! i LOVE it, great work!
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this was a wonderful write and a beautiful take on the promptreally giving a depth and menaing
well done aqnd congrats on the silver
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Wowww. youa di da great job with the promtp.
lub yas.
wriet on.
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Congrats on your shiny ! Well desrved this was excellent!
I loved it!So sad it was.
~lisa~
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awesome take on the prompt,
best of luck
Tasha
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Very nice take on the prompt here! Thank you so much for your entry!
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