The sands of time
effortlessly immersing
away the moments
of our daily lives
Lives enhanced by motions
as each new grain falls;
stillness empowering diligence
compassion encapsulates
our mystical wonders
Author notes
PROMPT:
"Sifting through the hourglass..."
A contest entry
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600 points, ended October 13, 2007, 8 entries
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Comments
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Great job on this !
as each new grain falls;
stillness empowering diligence
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Excellent take on the prompt! Thank you so much for your entry!
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Well done, indeed
Nice word choices
Best of luck!
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