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One Tiny Sand

Examining  tiny sands piece by piece

each one

  seconds in life

assorting ,reasoning

set apart blissful ,breaths

of knowing it only take

the one sand

make or break a life.

 

 

 

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  • Liquid memories
    October 13, 2007

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    yes, all things have iomportance within our lives. very nice thoughts.


  • shuvi
    October 13, 2007

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    Excellent write.. "only one speck of sand is needed to make or break..".. how true! very beautifully written.. and the pic goes in so well with it! love and cheers, shuvi


  • Stardust-luvr
    October 13, 2007
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    intense and deep thought provoking write xx well done and best wishes xx


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    October 13, 2007
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    This is neat.


  • PerfectImperfection
    October 13, 2007
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    Interesting take on the prompt chosen. Thank you so much for your entry!

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