Disaster.
We turned gold
to home and laughter.
Then that pinhole in the ground
became our ceiling.
Now you're missing. So I'm digging.
My fingernails caked
with crumbly love.
Author notes
"sifting through the hourglass..."
A contest entry
- Quickie! ~Paying It Forward~ - Just Because I Can!!!! by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended October 13, 2007, 8 entries
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simple short sweet saying...
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I like the last lines , great job on the prompt
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Interesting.
I will have to be on the look out for crumbly love.
Be Well -
Nice take on the prompt! Thank you so much for your entry!
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