Dejection speaking abandoned tones
Polarized reflection haunts a scene
Absence twists in windless voids
Memories gray scaled of agony
Wounded light for tired eyes
Wordless suggestions
That I am alone
A contest entry
- Quickie! ~Paying It Forward~ - Just Because I Can!!!! by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended October 13, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow this is amazing bro and so beautifully taken from the prompt
i loved it well done and congrats on the gold
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Wow. you did and excelent job on the prompt. ::Hgugles::
write ons.
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awesome write and take on the prompt, not sure if intentional, but i like how the shape of your poem reflects the title
best of luck
Tasha
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awww this is just so sad , awww very good take on this pic !
~lisa~
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empty or not my dear bro your cup runneth over with your intensity and wonderful imagery xoxoxo well done and best wishes xxx
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Great take on the prompt chosen. Nicely penned! Thanks for the entry!
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Such intense words! I am amazed by the power of this write.. very very well-written.. This was AWESOME! Each line stood out in itself.. 30 words well used! love and cheers, shuvi
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