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Pangea

Portions eons ago united
a world now long dead

not soiled by pollution

grew wild with foliage
empty of human habitation
a paradise of silence

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  • Danna Hobart
    October 22, 2007
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    Wow, this is very consise. Thanks for entering.


  • PerfectImperfection
    October 15, 2007

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    A very potent piece of thought described herein. Great acrostic my dear! Best wishes in the contest!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    October 13, 2007

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    this is a beautiful write and so wonderfully written amkes me want to go to this place
    well done bro and best of luck


  • slipperssun gold member
    October 12, 2007

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    i think i want to find this place you wrote of... the serenity would be awesome... good luck in your contest
    cheers
    Jen