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In Love Until The End (with you)

if a nightmare could have a nightmare she would be mine
for eternally is the thought in my head tearing me apart
as if i had died in the winter forged in my heart
and my blood seeping into the sands of time

her call is endless and forever to see
taking away pain once felt in me
for the sun is dying in my eyes
she is the answer to my cries

if i open my eyes and see she isn't there
my life only to be to compare
my heart forgotten in the light of her
and eternally at night would i stir

without my nightmare to come at midnight
i would always be in fright
without the scare only cast in pearl
for within her arms i alwasy unfurl

my hatred seeps away with her smile
and takes me along the haunted mile
her beauty in my eyes and her grace in my thoughts
my heart in her hands is eternally caught

i'd do everything for her
for she is my goddess holding the pearl
of my love so pure and undying
for now her tears are forever trying

she keeps me awake at night
for when i fall asleep always the fright
of losing her once again in my arms
and forgetting those loveable charms

she is and always will be my love
she makes me feel as if i wasn't forsaken
and my heart is hers forever taken
as if flying like a dove

as my demons call me back to solitude
i cast away the rose into the flame
for without her i would be cursed
forever into deaths lonely game

reaching for the light of day
and the spring to be forever mine
she dances into the ocean
water sparking never letting her stray

take me into the darkness
let me be with you
for i'd sell my soul
just to keep my love true

if i ever lost you
i would surely leave
this place called earth
as i would forever grieve

if i could only hear
that you are in love with me
i would let go of the light
and fall into the darkness with thee

as angels dance
and devils cry
for your love in return
i'll always die

my heart's in your hands
and no where else
and i will keep it there
unless you give it to someone else

but i always hope you'll keep it with you
then my love will always be true
your tears of crystal fall from the sky
i wipe them away as i hold back my cries

your so beautiful to me
and i would give everything to you
and forever i always want you to be
in my heart as long as you are true

as the night becomes day
i look upon the sunrise
and you are still asleep
in your beautiful disguise

as i write these words
the sands of time fade away
as i paint my heart for you
i hope in your chest it will always stay

sleep on my love
for tommorrows another day
sleep forever i dont care
as long as i can see you stay

i see the seasons falling apart
as you sleep on and see
you heal my scars of loves once lost
but i never knew real love till i met thee

as the world falls apart in my eyes
i look upon you silently sleeping and not care at all
for the world is only a dream but you are my reality
and with you allows me never to fall

as i stroke your hair as the world dies out
just seeing you makes me never cry out
to the world in hate for in the end
i love you to the ends of the earth without a doubt


Author notes

I wrote this for the girl that i am currently in love with. And me being her boyfriend made this all the more nessecary even though everything i said in it is true.

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Comments

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  • xxmidnightxxmusicxx
    April 5, 2008
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    that was undout-ably the best poem i have ever read so sweet but also so sad


  • Funeral Ballerina
    October 29, 2007

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    Amazing flow of words and superbly penned expression of love... Lovely details and such a captivating read.. I can't even pick out my favorite part of the poem... This poem is beautifully touching...

    Great work...

  • Vampire WillowTeen
    October 22, 2007
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    i love the poem taht was beautifu


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 22, 2007

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    Wowzer!!!

    This is a great poem, long but good. Your girl truly is lucky to have someone who loves her so completely as you obviously do. Fabtastic!
    Pink xx


    • nightmare-lestat
      October 29, 2007
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      thankyou so much for you comment, i try my best to show her how much i actually do love her

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