if a nightmare could have a nightmare she would be mine
for eternally is the thought in my head tearing me apart
as if i had died in the winter forged in my heart
and my blood seeping into the sands of time
her call is endless and forever to see
taking away pain once felt in me
for the sun is dying in my eyes
she is the answer to my cries
if i open my eyes and see she isn't there
my life only to be to compare
my heart forgotten in the light of her
and eternally at night would i stir
without my nightmare to come at midnight
i would always be in fright
without the scare only cast in pearl
for within her arms i alwasy unfurl
my hatred seeps away with her smile
and takes me along the haunted mile
her beauty in my eyes and her grace in my thoughts
my heart in her hands is eternally caught
i'd do everything for her
for she is my goddess holding the pearl
of my love so pure and undying
for now her tears are forever trying
she keeps me awake at night
for when i fall asleep always the fright
of losing her once again in my arms
and forgetting those loveable charms
she is and always will be my love
she makes me feel as if i wasn't forsaken
and my heart is hers forever taken
as if flying like a dove
as my demons call me back to solitude
i cast away the rose into the flame
for without her i would be cursed
forever into deaths lonely game
reaching for the light of day
and the spring to be forever mine
she dances into the ocean
water sparking never letting her stray
take me into the darkness
let me be with you
for i'd sell my soul
just to keep my love true
if i ever lost you
i would surely leave
this place called earth
as i would forever grieve
if i could only hear
that you are in love with me
i would let go of the light
and fall into the darkness with thee
as angels dance
and devils cry
for your love in return
i'll always die
my heart's in your hands
and no where else
and i will keep it there
unless you give it to someone else
but i always hope you'll keep it with you
then my love will always be true
your tears of crystal fall from the sky
i wipe them away as i hold back my cries
your so beautiful to me
and i would give everything to you
and forever i always want you to be
in my heart as long as you are true
as the night becomes day
i look upon the sunrise
and you are still asleep
in your beautiful disguise
as i write these words
the sands of time fade away
as i paint my heart for you
i hope in your chest it will always stay
sleep on my love
for tommorrows another day
sleep forever i dont care
as long as i can see you stay
i see the seasons falling apart
as you sleep on and see
you heal my scars of loves once lost
but i never knew real love till i met thee
as the world falls apart in my eyes
i look upon you silently sleeping and not care at all
for the world is only a dream but you are my reality
and with you allows me never to fall
as i stroke your hair as the world dies out
just seeing you makes me never cry out
to the world in hate for in the end
i love you to the ends of the earth without a doubt
Author notes
I wrote this for the girl that i am currently in love with. And me being her boyfriend made this all the more nessecary even though everything i said in it is true.
A contest entry
- I WANT REAL EMOTION!!!! Cathartic writing - Open to everyone by theworldisquiethere.
650 points, ended November 8, 2007, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I wanna feel loved ! by Live with a passion.
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Comments
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that was undout-ably the best poem i have ever read so sweet but also so sad


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Amazing flow of words and superbly penned expression of love... Lovely details and such a captivating read.. I can't even pick out my favorite part of the poem... This poem is beautifully touching...
Great work...

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thankyou, your comment means alot to me
all the best
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i love the poem taht was beautifu
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thankyou very much
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Wowzer!!!
This is a great poem, long but good. Your girl truly is lucky to have someone who loves her so completely as you obviously do. Fabtastic!
Pink xx


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thankyou so much for you comment, i try my best to show her how much i actually do love her
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