It's hard to explain
But I will make an attempt.
This is how I feel about you.
I just can't say it out loud.
When you look at me
Is when it all starts.
There's a whirlwind of butterflies
Deep in the pit of my stomach.
When you touch me
Shivers go down my spine.
I start thinking about life
A time for me and you.
When you kiss me
The butterflies creep up...
Way deep into my heart.
It starts beating fast.
When you make love to me
My whole world comes together.
My head starts spinning really fast.
I realize that you are my world.
That is how it happened
In the order of events.
I couldn't help the outcome...
I fell in love with you.
A contest entry
- PASSIONATE LOVE by Expression.
575 points, ended October 15, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is a very sweet poem indeed. good in the contest
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ok, enough with the love already. u make me sick. lol and this, with the "making love" part, is really not what i need to read. jk
good luck in the contest. this is pretty good, flow a little off in places but overall pretty good. the emotion is really there. -
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moms shouldnt read some poems their kids right...but thanks for the opinion.
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just not a thought i need to have. lol sort of like me writing about what i do to your dad!!
I'll warn u if i ever write something u shouldn't read! haha -
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id very much appreciate that
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