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"Did You Know?"

Within just a few moments you captured my heart. 

 

 

As your passionate words filled my soul,

 

seducing my mind like a melody

 

made more beautiful by each note. 

 

 

Your eyes are my window to a world yet unseen. 

 

 

Your touch more desirable,

 

with each message you leave. 

 

 

The love flows so freely from your heart, your pen. 

 

 

Yet leaves so much to ache for as each word is read. 

 

 

Within just a few moments you captured my heart. 

 

 

Your my beacon of strength when times are dark. 

 

 

Always there to bring me back up. 

 

 

I wish I knew your true feelings,

 

your wishes,

 

your dreams ...

 

for I will always be there, be seen in these things? 

 

 

Maybe in time these questions will be answered ...

 

I ask only this,

 

within just a few moments you captured my heart dear one,

 

While in these few moments was yours captured in return? 

 

 

These questions will always follow me 

 

for wherever I may be

 

you'll always be a part of me.

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  • Painful Expressions
    July 6, 2008
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    Yes

    The answer is YES!


  • xXxCry-HavocxXx
    January 23, 2008
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    This is a good write!

  • Bob Fox
    January 12, 2008

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    A wish

    Upon that star and a movie that brings tears to one's eyes. Where has it all gone in our material world? Heart throbs here

  • diseasedpoet
    December 25, 2007

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    IM so amazed by the talent @ allpoetry .com your very gifted and i can relate completely to your expressions in this poem i give you 4 stars


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 23, 2007

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    Excellent write here

    Very good write and your profile page is grand I am so proud of all our service men and women and am having a book published and will be out in july .The first 30 poems are for our heroes of our land . Some of those that will be in my book are on my profile page .I hope sometime youm might drop by and check a few out .

  • celadia
    November 13, 2007

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    Loverly

    This is a beautiful poem, very rhythmic and flowing. Such emotions are rarely so wonderfully expressed.


  • GoodKnightPoet
    November 5, 2007

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    This is a very good poem. I really like your selection of words. You are truly romantic. Passion is wonderful.

  • celadia
    October 15, 2007
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    Truly emotional and feeling. and well written. I liked this poem a lot.


  • Talking Toni gold member
    October 13, 2007

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    Beautiful.....................

    and intense!!!! This was very well written. It revealed your inner most feelings for this man along with your devotion to him for life. I hope his response is yes to the question you asked of him as well. This had a poetic aura all throughout the piece, and again it was very well written. Thanks for sharing this with me tonight!!!~~Toni~~


  • StarEyes
    October 13, 2007

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    Mom,

    You seem to be reading my mind and heart lately! LOL, this is great! I love this one! I can sooooo relate! Thanks mom, for always knowing just what I need! I love you!

    and love

    Nyetta

  • Lord Gegishov
    October 12, 2007

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    IT is interesting that I have read this after spending the past three hours reading "Symposium" at Barnes & Noble. This piece seems to represent the love that Aristophanes speaks about, which is a very pretty notion. However, Socrates' account seems much more reliable. But this is still a delightful poem.


  • Androgyneric
    October 12, 2007
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    Aww, this made me smile so much! I love it! Bravo! ^^


  • rustynite silver member
    October 12, 2007
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    great words. nice thoughts. a time of one between two hearts. smile.

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