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The light in my eyes

You are the light in my eyes.
I see how much you shine,
to me you are no surprise
you dream every dream of mine.

A shining beauty we can clearly see
As you guide me through it all,
and help my dreams fly free
Raising me up when I may fall.

You are the shining light
the brightest star in the skies
hope and dreams you bring
A love that shines so bright
guiding me through everything.

You are my bright shining star
The glow of the sun
The beauty of a view from afar
The glitter of a starlit sky
The tune the birds sung.

You are the light in my eyes
Lifting me so I can live my destiny.

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  • Grey Mouser
    October 30, 2007

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    Nicely done, dedicating your heart and soul in this declaration of love. Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • slipperssun gold member
    October 12, 2007

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    a beautiful concept ... i really enjoyed this one i wish you all the best in your contest...
    cheers
    jen