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To Quit

It's hard to quit
I have to bite the bit
a cigaratte it decieves
into percieving
it mocks into believing
that you need a cigaratte for beliving
to be cool
you shouldn't have to drool
like a fool
and sit on a stool
and puff away like a yule
get it out of your mind
or you will be blind
.....to quit

Author notes

this is my first poem in a while so don't be too harsh and its one of my few rhyme poems that i have ever made.

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  • surreal realist
    November 17, 2007
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    Yes, addictions suck. They kinda' "creep in".

  • CountCrimsonDWinter
    October 14, 2007

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    That is very true somepeople just smole because they think its cool, but its not all that cool at all now days it actually hard to find people that still smoke and there will be a day when no one smokes any more it was cool in the 80's but not anymore. But its nice to see you and some poems i havent seen you in awhile i hope everthing is alright.
    ~Count Crimson Avarus~