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Autumn Song

drift melancholy
beautiful instrumental
acquainted falling

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  • thepoetssoul
    October 13, 2007

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    Wow I really like this haiku.
    Wonderful wording indeed
    Thanks for the entry
    Best of wishes to you

    Tony

    • saddie23
      October 13, 2007
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      thank u,

      Thank u Tony for allowing me to perticipate in this contest. I'm honored that u liked my ku. Saddie23


  • RX-Queen
    October 13, 2007
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    great poem, well written and alot was said in few words. well done.

    • saddie23
      October 13, 2007

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      wow!!

      I'm glad u liked my ku and welcome to allpoetry it is a wonderful haven of wonderful poets learning and growing in writing their muse. Thank u for the gracious comments. Saddie23


  • Maybe.I.Am.Broken.
    October 13, 2007
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    i love this poem, wven though it is very short, but it speaks the truth, keep writing!!!

    • saddie23
      October 13, 2007
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      thank u

      thank u for the gracious sentiments given to my ku. Saddie23


  • TheLostGirl
    October 13, 2007
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    I love it it's only has 6 words but it speaks volumes I love the wourd melancholy it just makes me feel things

    • saddie23
      October 13, 2007
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      wow!

      I'm impressed how quick I would get commnet on my ku. I'm glad u liked it. Saddie23

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