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As The Seasons Change

Now that the cold weather is gone
The earth takes off her white hat
Put on her beautiful green robes, just on time
For the St. Patrick day parade

From far you can hear, the red winged blackbirds
Flute their beautiful love songs happy spring
Is finally here again, welcoming the beautiful green trees
Back to life, after a long white winter vacation

Now it feels right again, the afternoon is bright and cool
Feel like drinking a nice cup of tea, on a raining night
As the afternoon approaching, the red image of the sun set
Reflected on the blue cloud, make the sky smile
Your soul open up, life feels happy and beautiful again

As the sun calm down, the beautiful green jasmine come out
And fill the air with her soft pleasant scent, seducing
The handsome sparrows, bring them back to the dance floor
As the Sparrows celebrate a long lasting love,
With their desire mates, before summer finally arrived

When summer arrived, and bring back the warm day light,
The trees change their coat, for a beautiful soft green dresses,
put on their high heels with their long, and sexy legs
looking to dance the night away, As the garden
offering these beautiful red roses to the butterflies

As the welcome back, to the garden all the colorful butterflies
and the sexy field sparrow, with their beautiful green,
yellow and red dresses make the day seems more and more excited,
as garden prepared these beautiful blossom red roses for
tonight occasion, when all the lovers kiss the nigh away,

Until autumn make it’s come back
But autumn is the fall of the leaves and the rain
It’s time for the trees, the red roses to take off their make up
And go to bed, and dream of what was once a beautiful summer,
As the rain bring new life and new beginning,

Winter soon approaching, he will make sure to
Bless us with the beautiful white Snow,
But remember winter always bring the freezing days
So the Earth will have to wear her beautiful white hat

And all the lovers need to get close again, because
That’s the time of the year when we create a new life
And keep each other warm as we wait
For the cold weather night to say good bye





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  • delightfulmess silver member
    October 17, 2007

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    Whoa this was stunning. What a amazing tale of nature
    very vivid EXCELLENT!!! thank you for entering the contest



    delila


  • captain howdy
    October 14, 2007
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    Pure beauty here!


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    October 14, 2007

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    A good poem,enjoyed reading it

    What a pity Persephone has to go down

    to hades ones again and the mourning

    of Di-miter begins and lasts all through

    the winter

    keep up the good work

    Nick


  • lovelifelive gold member
    October 14, 2007

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    Beautiful

    Here's another great poem. i love picture you panited
    really doesn't need the pic. your wording capture an
    amazing image.best of luck in contest.
    cori


  • flight
    October 13, 2007

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    Nature never fails to inspire! You captured lots
    of images and I felt each season change!
    Though I do admit it got long for me, but you
    made it worth the read!!

    peace to all ~flight


  • Sandygram silver member
    October 13, 2007

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    Well My friend you have penned quite a masterpiece here. The imagery you wrote is quite stunning. It paints a beautiful picture of the changing seasons. Your talent really shines through in this one. One of your best. It is a pleasure to read hear in Pennsylvania on this crisp autumn day. The leaves are changing to their beautiful foliage. Thank you for sharing. Take care, Sandy


  • Amera gold member
    October 13, 2007

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    The picture you poested is beautiful and the poem is even better. You have penned an image of pure flowing beauty. I love this!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    October 13, 2007

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    stunning hun, truly beautiful piece you have written here....your writing is truly blossoming

    you walked me through all the images you painted.

    Tasha


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    October 13, 2007

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    BREATH TAKING

    Seasons come and season go but your beautiful words will last forever...The pictures you have penned are breath taking!It felt like a slow walk through nature one season at a time...My Brother you are truly a wonderful Poet!


  • kennethlaney
    October 13, 2007
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    Beautiful poem

    Very descriptive poetry my friend! Gives good visual images in my mind! Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest.


  • kennethlaney
    October 13, 2007

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    Beautiful poem

    Very descriptive poetry my friend! Gives good visual images in my mind! Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest.


  • JoyfulWriter
    October 13, 2007

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    I am in awe of you, my friend! Loved the images here and the beautiful and magnificence that your writing brought forth to the reader...best of luck to you in this contest...smiles, Terry


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    October 13, 2007

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    Indeed Delightful Bro

    this picture is beautiful, I love the forest and waterfalls. All in one, you have penned this perfectly . Well done, always a Pleasure

    diva


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    October 13, 2007

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    That was absolutely amazing. I loved it. You did a great job with the imagery and from shifting from one season to the next. Good luck in the contest.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

    • Marctheman
      October 13, 2007
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      thank you very much, my dear friend you are a kind heart.


  • blueyez
    October 13, 2007

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    A beautiful picture, I had to wonder did you write the poem then pick the pic? Or did you find the pic and write the write? hmmmmm...


    • Marctheman
      October 13, 2007
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      I saw the picture first, and decided to write about it for the contest, thank you very much for reading.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    October 13, 2007

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    You have written an incredible account of the changing of the seasons. The images that you placed in my mind were as vivid as if I was actually viewing them.
    There is one little phrase in there that I thought was superb, talking about the sun setting and you said 'make the sky smile', I don't know why but I just love that.

    Thanks for sharing this with me...

    Sue


  • Pyper Rain gold member
    October 12, 2007

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    The changing of the seasons and all the colorful clothes they wear, wonderful writing, as I felt every one with all my senses, your last stanza making me smile.

    Good luck in the contest!!!

    ~B.

    • Marctheman
      October 13, 2007
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      thank you for reading my friend, glad i can put a smile on your face.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    October 12, 2007

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    a beautiful write which holds much imagery and emotions within it
    it is powerfully penned and is captivating
    wel done and best of luck

    • Marctheman
      October 13, 2007
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      Miss Char, thank you very much for all the supports you are the best.

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