Dry your tears,
find your strength,
look up to the light.
Weak and nearly dead,
you've fallen into darkness -
a world of never-ending night.
Stand up,
be strong,
try with all of your might.
Look into your heart,
for you may find
that you might just win the fight.
A contest entry
- Courage by Aun Ali.
500 points, ended October 28, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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^_^
YAY!! happy, moving, and honestly inspirational. You capture the thoughts of many people as they try and struggle to succeed. Very very well done.
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This was sweet and moving. Good job on your write and good luck in the contest, I did enjoy the read.
Jen -
Short and Good
Good write my friend, its a good, short and tender message. Thanks to enter and All the best.
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