While you're in the shower
I imagine the soap slides
down your lean body
rolling off smooth skin
I cast these visions away
it's too late for this
you open the door
I notice a following mist
Your smile is graceful
and yet, I feel dirty
these images I see
I curse your beauty
I can't stop myself
I must bring you closer
admiring your mouth
there's no better lover
Content, you lay against me
I know you're used to this
softly, I touch and plead
for those humid lips
you're almost too precious
delicate and kind
in this world of sins
finally something that's mine
Author notes
I used the first picture for inspiration. The title 'Still' is meant as in, unmoving. Not as in 'continuously'. (Just to be clear)
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt – ADULTS ONLY!! – Pre Writes Welcome by Tristan Storm.
650 points, ended November 16, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Can you feel the emotions?
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Thank you for your entry into my contest
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I got the still... Very beautiful imagery in this poem and a great write overall. I really liked the last stanza as well which ties in nicely with my prompt to an extent.
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Good Luck and I hope to read a lot more of your work soon.
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thank you so much.
I haven't written anything in a while though, I think I'll start again with your kind words. ^-^ -
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It is an absolute pleasure - keep writing! - dont worry I think my muse has also drowned....
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beautiful imagery...
precious is precisely the word...you're almost too precious
delicate and kind
in this world of sins
finally something that's mine
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thank you so much. I spent a lot of time thinking about my most desired better half, and this is what I came up with. hopefully it was good enough. =)
I appreciate this comment, really.
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