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Jam

Not sickly sweet
but utter perfection
So beautiful
My shining star

A bad kept secret
You better believe it
A lingering thought
The thing inside

Now locked up tight
Deep down but always there
Never to escape my heart
My lovely Jam

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  • Immortal Flesh
    February 10, 2008

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    This sounds like a crush almost. Like as if someone was hiding or keeping a secret crush. But it can also pass for many other things, like awkwardness of being in this jam. And not really revealing it to the person they like.
    I liked reading it