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Rain, Rain

misted auras, dripping drops
harvested tears from a cyclops
gloomy and forbidden, sad yet happy
delicately hanging in the balance of life

rain, rain, with all your might

drenching sleet, painful hail
dark stormclouds following your tail
drizzle, mist falling on your head
so much left, left out to be said

rain, rain, with all your strength

clean and clear, calming, moist
dirty, acidic wrongfully made choice
muddy ground, giant, slippery puddles
heartfelt cries from those who are confuzzled

rain, rain, with everything you got

rain, rain, with the snow and hail

rain, rain, never forget, never forgotten

rain, rain....

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  • Magical Panda
    April 21

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    This is beautiful, and I like that it could mean alot of different things, or it could be a poem about the beauty of nature. it's really open for interpretation

    • You're right, it really is open for interpretation... I really have no clue what this could mean.. .lol