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Child's song

Sail on sweet waters
Gently close your eyes
Stay innocent, you precious thing
Don't look, don't see.

There's no magic in this world
But I want you to believe
I'll speak to you of sunshine
I'll speak to you of love

Just don't open your eyes.

You are the world's only child
I want to show you life
Please, keep believing
Don't ever stop dreaming

I'll row us out to sea
The water is like glass
They'll never miss us
And you'll never have to know

Just don't open your eyes.

I'll show you spires of white
I'll show you shores of green
I'll show you what I can't see

Just don't open your eyes.


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Today I realized that the world is a dull, lifeless place.

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  • JinSays gold member
    October 14, 2007
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    Dull, lifeless place...?
    I really liked this write, till I got to the notes..
    you should come and see my life, it's full of color, and magic, and life, and love, and peace and joy, and sunshine..This life is what we choose to make it, come to my side of the street...there's plenty of room here..
    jin