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Love Alone

This feels like death except darker,
feels like pain except colder,
feels like grief with more then loss,
feels like a forest with only moss,
feels like i'm bleeding without a scar,
feels like i'm broken without a cure.
It feels like torture with no end in sight,
feels like love alone.

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  • SoxxDisastrous
    January 19, 2008

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    I love this. It’s short, but in a good way. It’s very well written and flows wonderfully. Overall, simply beautiful. Great job.


  • cupcakecultx33
    November 17, 2007
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    Awww. I fell for you