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Fading away...

They don't understand
  as I sit here in silence,
How lonely I feel,
  invisable, dying,
They don't seem to hear me
  or see me at all,
I wonder why bother?
  Is life worth it all?
Will I ever be noticed
  or live this forever?
This nightmarish world
  of hate and despair.
Life should be lived happy
  or not lived at all.
I wish I could run,
  and get away from it all

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It's my first poem

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  • XxnevertrustxX
    October 15, 2007
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    its good,i dont know bout you but writting eally helps, your not alone feeling like that


  • emo-darkness21
    October 14, 2007
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    Nice Job!

    Nice!I to feel the same way!