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Fading away...

They don't understand
  as I sit here in silence,
How lonely I feel,
  invisable, dying,
They don't seem to hear me
  or see me at all,
I wonder why bother?
  Is life worth it all?
Will I ever be noticed
  or live this forever?
This nightmarish world
  of hate and dispare.
Life should be lived happy
  or not lived at all.
I wish I could run
  and get away from it all

Author notes

This is the first poem I wrote - I didn't reli no wat i was doin (not that i no now) but it just kinda came 2 me

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  • Natsu
    October 12, 2007
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    Good Job!

    I really like your poem, maybe because it resembles my life in a way. Good job, keep it up! xD