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Oceanic Dreams (Haiku)

oceanic dreams
submerged in crystal waters
creatures of wonder

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Haiku using the standard 5-7-5 syllable counts

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 1, 2008

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    Oh a ocean Haiku this is jsut lovely thank you very much for this I hope I get some like this in my contest have a great night


  • Pollycheck
    December 3, 2007

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    oceanic dreams
    submerged in crystal waters
    creatures of wonder

    Thank you for entering my ku contest. I have always been in awe of the beauty of the undersea world.


  • thepoetssoul
    October 12, 2007

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    This is a nicely written haiku.
    Very well done great imagery
    Good flow good wording.
    Thanks for sharing

    Tony


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 12, 2007
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    Very nicely done, my sweet friend
    Very much enjoyed
    Love ya muches,
    Sandy