I heard she's smart,
ranges from General Washington to clothes.
I heard she's beautiful,
straight hair, small frame, perfect nose.
I heard she's funny,
each stomach muscle for miles aches.
I heard she's silly,
she's goofier than I Love Lucy remakes.
I heard you love her,
she's the one you've always dreamed of.
I heard you praise her,
like she's an angel God sent you from above.
I have to admit I'm jealous,
of this fantasy girl I see.
I just keep hoping,
that your dream girl would be me.
Author notes
I just felt like writing this. I haven't written in awhile so it's probably terrible. This is just some thoughts of how I want to feel. I want to be someones dream girl one day. I know that God will send me one in my own time, and that I have to be patient. But I can still dream, right?
Please tell me what you think
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totaly...
i know what you are saying...everyword of it. just to be wanted and loved and held like you knowsomeone is going to bed thinking about going to bed knowing someone is inlove with you...its an AMAZING feeling and i have only had it once but that boy of my dreams still calls me his girl so for that i am happy... again great poem keep up the good work i am looking forward to reading more!
Darkness
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awwwwwwww
One day......... when God is ready, you shall find that one and you will be the apple of his eye. and yes you can dream!!! Great write and I wish all of God's blessings on you, Mark
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i like it its really good
love from rhianna
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i love it!!!
but now you are josh's dream girl!!!
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Amazing!!!!!
This was really good and it's a feeling a lot of people have. I know that when the day comes God will send you the one that you deserve who has always dreamed he'd hold you in his arms til the day he dies. Still I loved it none the less because I've known the feeling.
Love always~Steph
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very good!!! you did a great job with this poem!! it was sad but great!!
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I thought it was good, kinda sad though....
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Im feelin it Ashley...
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Hello dear Ashley. This was so lovely. I am so glad you are writing again.,
Woo Hoo!!!!! You are a wonderful girl already. I have always been proud to be your AP mom the past 2 years. You arte beautiful inside and out and yes that special someone will pop into your life when you least exspect it. Hugs and Smiles for you. Love you a bunch.
God Bless You Mom.
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Sweetie, This is Great! I really really like it.
Sometimes, People have this "perfect" image of someone in their head, and dream of her/him forever...Or think they see it in someone...but in reality, no ones perfect, there's no way we can be...and the people who have a person they think are perfect...find out how so not perfect they are.
But anyways.. I'm rambling... This is beautiful! Great job! And I'm glad your muse is back!
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