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"The Lost Girl"

She was happy,
knew what she wanted.
Made a mistake,
and threw it all away.

Why did she do it,
it was just for fun.
who is she now?
she is the lost girl.

Her happiness,
has turned into tears.
She thinks about dying,
wanting to run away.

Going crazy,
not knowing what to do.
who is she now?
she is the lost girl.

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  • FreeFalling911
    October 12, 2007

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    good

    short but good. I really liked "her happiness has turned into tears" that is my favorite part. Thank you for entering my contest.