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A Tribute to The House on Mango Street

Do You See Me? (A tribute to Sally)


I see you
whispering behind my ear
gazing into my cleopatra black eyes.

I see you
acting like an idiot
wanting to run your fingers through my silky hair

I see you
wishing that you had my looks
envy sparking through your fingertips

I see you
spreading rumors behind my back
talking about a bad reputation
being a traitor
instead of a best friend
hating me
instead of loving me
beating me
instead of hugging me
or giving me a kiss on the cheek

Do you see me
when I walk home
afraid of what lies inside?

Do you see me
when my stomach leaps to my throat
when I know I have nowhere to hide?

Do you see me
When I come to school
with scars and signs of hurt
that invade my face?

Do you see me
when I hide my pain with beauty
cover it up with make-up
and a flirtatious atmosphere? 

Do you see me
when he loses control
with that belt
and that buckle?



i did his for a english project

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  • TheClosestThing
    November 21, 2007

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    The beginning is decent, but it really picks up during the middle, and the end is a very successful way to conclude. The imagery and descriptions are also really useful, as I can imagine and see this whole situation. Nice work!