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Anniversary Waltz

I am woman.  I must roar.
Though only a mewling kitten.
Independent and alone.

But lonely.

You walked in my life,
Quiet and easy.
Like you belonged there.

But I resisted.

Marry me, you said.
Not now, don’t ask.
You asked again.

I said no.

You fixed my doors.
You washed my dishes,
You replaced my tires.

Just like you belonged there.

And I began to see
that independence doesn’t mean being alone
that loving doesn’t mean giving up

or giving in

But giving myself
And accepting you
And letting you in,

So I said yes,

all those years ago.

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  • LadyLeviathan silver member
    October 14, 2007
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    awwww this was truly beautiful with such a clear message within it! very cute! i love it!