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Expert

Surely I'm an expert,
In much of what I do.
I hurt, I cry, I cut myself,
And you don't have a clue.

Surely I'm an artist,
My paintings so divine
That cherry red and smiling lips
are painted over mine.

Surely I collect things,
Saving every tear.
Bottling up each feeling, labelled
'love' or 'pain' or 'fear'.

Surely I'm a dreamer.
For in my mind I see,
That young mans gentle heartbeat,
Lying, perfect, next to me.

Surely I'm a writer.
Such poems that I write,
Tell the world I've given in,
Go down without a fight.

Surely I'm a doctor.
Each cut tenderly treated.
But every single bloody score,
Just proves that I'm defeated.

Surely I'm a cleaner,
To sweep away the pain.
But I cannot be all that good,
It soon finds me again.

Surely I'm an expert,
In much of what I do.
But I cannot be all that good,
Or wouldn't I have you?

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Written when missing a friend and loved one. Any comments happily accepted! =D

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  • emo-darkness21
    October 14, 2007
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    Kool

    Nice write!,srry that your missing them,But Nice Poem!-emo21

  • sweetdancer
    October 12, 2007
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    very nice!i love the words you put into this poem!i love the ending its pure and sweet!to tell you the truth i think this one of the best poems on this website!well i have to go!bye,as i always say always try your best and never give up!

    sincerely,
    sweetdancer (yasmine)