There are times when you lose
The battles you bravely fight for
You don't deserve it but you can't help it
You don't know why you have to stumble
It's a road you and I face
Sometimes in life it happens
But don't give up,we still have tomorrow
It may be rough on you today
Hold on, there is hope....
For as long as the sun shines
There's got to be a door that leads you in
Don't let your fears overtake you
Don't let your failures drown you
Be strong, you've got to show the world
You've got to tell them you can
Don't give up;the light will be here soon
A contest entry
- Courage by Aun Ali.
500 points, ended October 28, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very Nice
Wow beautiful write of encouragement. The title don't give up is perfect and the first line There are times when you loose and the last line Don't give up; the light will be here soon!! Beautiful write on encouragement not to give up. Thank you for sharing with me. Sorry it took so long to return the favor. You were so kind about the loss of my son, so thank you. Kelle Marie, stavykm
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Nice uplifting piece for anyone that is going thru a troble time. Good write and good luck in the contest, I did enjoy the read.
Jen -
A good piece
Surely, light will be there soon. A good piece of work dear friend. Thanks for entering the Contest. All the best.
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