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The Forbidden Tree of Desires

The Forbidden Tree of Desires

By: Mrs. Lady Enthralling

 

 

 

 

Gentle desires

as she has charming powers

to make me sit still and collect myself

Crystal myth of her gardens speak in whispers

Of hello here on this tree I have all the satisfactions

You need

As I flee

and fall on the delicate soul of my knees

The speaking of her eyes stole sun light

As she said let me feed you sex appeal of my foods of

Eternal life

I observe the food of her as I bite away at the bottom part of my lip.

She walked away as

I saw the most gorgeous feminine hips

As a moment of arrest

start splashing the thoughts of her in my mind as

There is no sub lines of the best wine I will ever find

As I now chase her

but suddenly she disappears as shivering in disappointment

Have I ran away passion

Leaving her in denying clear as I suddenly

Wipe the smear of pride off my face

And walked up to the tree of desire

To eternally die for ever

To the smoothness of her skin

As my lips meet her chin

Her mouth opened awe

As my tongue slid in

I assaulted her shirt open as

As she smelled of earthly roses

Clinching the tree of her defending desires

Erect nipples melted in my mouth

I will later taste her crouch

And smack on pearls real sensually

And slowly

The earth departed her from me as she

Screams

NO

In echoes

It was that she was forbidden a tease of

My imagination

Speaking to

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© Julia L. Clark Registration Number Txu 1 - 259- 764, All rights reserved

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

The Forbidden Tree of Desires

This piece is for my Lady Forbidden
thanks for reading

Mrs Enthralling

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  • Skyee
    December 15, 2007

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    when i saw the heading i though it wa about a tree
    silly me? nice one ma'am
    so are all these the same lady foben and angelic sin?
    if so she is one helava lucky lady
    Thank you
    Skyee


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      December 15, 2007
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      most certainly two different woman
      ex wife she's sweet its just
      thinks its better we have no connection


  • A-Sky-Lark
    October 24, 2007
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    I love it, tho there is one word I think does not go with the poem. You see the poem in itself is quite beautiful and the word doesn't seem to match. In the 36th line "crouch", just doesn't seem to go. That's only my opinion. beautiful poem and thank you for entering.


  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    October 22, 2007

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    Although this is a very well written poem I do think the chosen subject matter is very common and I think you can do better. Thank you for entering though.


  • Brazos silver member
    October 12, 2007

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    Beautiful, My Sweet Baby

    Some people call temptation a vice, I call it a virtue. If we are not tempted, how are we to ever experience anything new? Sometimes its a bad thing, sometimes it's a good thing, but one thing for sure, it is always interesting. And, that interest is what keeps me alive...

    I could see and taste every bit of this write, wish I could do it for real, lol! You've blown me away again Julia, as usual, maybe it's that sexy new look of yours...

    I love you,
    B.


  • Marctheman
    October 12, 2007

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    I don't remember reading anything for you before, let me stop and say wow, you did great, what i lot about your piece, is that you take the reader to a journey, of excitement, the image on that poem is so clear you become part of the story, if keep on writing like that, you will have me at hello.

  • almostgone
    October 12, 2007
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    Beautiful piece hon. Very warm and sensual.


  • MahoganyFlow
    October 12, 2007

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    You out did yourself on this woman! This was beautiful! I love how it flowed and I fell into the emotion. Make me want to fall into my temptations! Keep Writing!!!


  • darell
    October 12, 2007

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    I'm so fucking Jealous!

    Baby that was so passionate and hot.
    I could taste the sensual sweetness of each
    erotically spoken word. Your lips call to me
    in the voice of seduction as you utter soft
    melodies of love to your sweet other.
    Fascinating and provocative.


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    October 12, 2007

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    Now you know I LOVE this!
    WOW...mesmerizing and indeed deep temptations rise and fall from this Fabulous and Delicious piece.
    Grand "Hand~stand" this is MY Favorite, absolutely

    piff


  • onesugar gold member
    October 12, 2007

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    I loved the feel to this

    Your words flowed smoothly from the

    page drawing your reader in.

    This was a pleasure to read

    Love ~sugar~

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