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I remember

I remember your kiss
I remember you caress
I remember you

Our love was like no other
a million kisses could not not compare
It was simple romace without a care

Bohemian Paris
You painted
I always waited

We made love
With bounteous caresses
As you undid my many dresses

You were bewitching
You had nothing to lose
I was your carefree muse

You were free
Like a bird
Yet hours could go by and I would hear no word

Yet you left
Left for fear of my state
As you did- my heart was to break

I remember your kiss
I remember you caress
I remember you

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I'm a girl and I write of love and heartbreak

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  • geminiblacc silver member
    October 12, 2007

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    Wow. This is amazing. I love the subtle rhyming, it's not forced or dulling out the essence of the poem. I love the wording, I love everything about this piece.