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Pure Love

Romance me
Dance with me
Embrace me
Lace kisses upon me

My darling this is love
Love like no other
Love from heavens above



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  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 12, 2007
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    This sounds like a working definition to me:lol Thanks for your entry into my contest


  • geminiblacc
    October 12, 2007

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    I like this. It captures you in what is a few moments of an experience and doesn't let you go. It has the power of a three page poem in seven stanza's. My favorite line is 'Love like no other,'because i think that that's what we're all looking for. Kudos.