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October

Old as I am, I truly can't help
Chocolate-collecting and running about
Taking the time to dress up just right
On a dark night, within the moonlight
Being someone else is a fascinating thing
Evil creatures, princesses and vampire's wings
Really, and truly, I don't want to grow up

In a list

A contest entry

October-ish enough for you?

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  • raspberry Greeters member
    November 5, 2007

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    Thanks for the entry. You should have taken care to meet all the rules of the contest, you have not marked the option number you chose to write in the author's comments. Would have appreciated if you had done it. Well, thats okay.. good luck.


  • cafegroundzero gold member
    October 31, 2007

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    This is Octoberish enough and straight out plain speaking


    And as a friend of Friends, I do like plain speech.

    Welcome to AP. I am a volunteer greeter. In this capacity, my role is to help usher you in to the experiences of this site, to answer any questions you may have, & to help you resolve any problems which may come up. Now for this contest, I will try my best to give you constructive criticism.

    I'll go ahead and give 'er a boost to the finals, so much I like this one. It is worded well, spelled well, maybe missing one period at the end, but that seems to be the fashion with so much poetry these days. Anyway, here you go. Three cheery emotos for you, hands up!


  • Haunted Doll
    October 31, 2007
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    my feelings about halloween exactly. this was whimsical and brought me memories.


  • Despairkitty
    October 14, 2007

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    WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!

    This was so cute. lol..made me smile. I still dress up though so I dont think that I ever really did grow up. Welcome and good luck in the contest.
    Despair


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    October 14, 2007

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    How cute!

    Good use of the theme and criteria is met well.
    I'm too old, but I play around anyhoo..LOL.
    Thank you for entering and welcome to AllPoetry
    where you'll learn so much while making friends!
    Warmly, CookieZeal :


    • Ebyru
      October 14, 2007
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      haha.

      I feel so sad when people tell me I shouldn't like Halloween anymore. It's so much fun!

      Thank you for the warm welcome, everyone seems so nice here. ^-^

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