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Shea

Exhale
The smoke clouds the air
Clouds the mind
We're all stoned off our ass
Sociopaths
Later I gotta date
With Jergans & Quilted Northern
Hope I don't get stood up
While I work
This unsteady beat
Endentured servitude
Cheese is cheese
I feel like a hungry rat
Need to grow my wings
Not the red kind
This Hawk will soar far
Soon

Author notes

Shea = hawk-like. Hence "This Hawk..."

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  • slipperssun gold member
    October 12, 2007
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    this is an interesting write.. thank you for th entry and i wish you well...
    cheers
    Jen